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Winning Poems for June 2007
Judge Bryan Appleyard



Bad Weather
by Dale McLain Wild Poetry Forum You can grow accustomed to storms. Every night they shake our sheetrock, set the bricks trembling. Mortar remembers it is only sand. Our jaunty roof begs to be doffed. And I huddle within my frame with dread and an awful wish that the past proves its redundancies, that miles away the twister will drop- not here, not now when I have just remembered my own name. When the windows bow like Galileo's glass I begin to pray to deities yet unnamed, beseech the clever stars that hide behind the churning ceiling. I confess that peace is not my plea. Instead I ask for more colors and a measure of strength to face the wind. The red oak fusses at my window, whines and scratches to come in. But it holds, this vine-covered house, stands on its wide flat bottom, a prairie boat anchored fast in hard white clay and history. Within I slip off my shoes. Tonight is not the night that I will walk on broken glass and wear the unmistakable face of disbelief. The thunder's growl begins to lose step with the lightning. In the attic rafters sigh and creak like scrawny old men. I lay my head on the last damp cloud where dreams of whirlwinds and flying shingles wait. I sleep like a town wiped off the map. The Daughter of Antiochus by Adam Elgar Writer's Block I am no viper, yet I feed on mother's flesh that did me breed. (Pericles, Prince of Tyre I i 65-6) No point dividing day from night since both are empty. I decline on sofas and chaises-- longues, hollow with age and boredom like a skin shedding its snake. These days I'm harmless, and my memory crusts over like my sight. But he's still sharp, his nose too long, his accent crude, his stink of the sea. The only one I really wanted. He saw me as I was, as Daddy made me, as Daddy had been making me for years. I heard someone name 'Tyre' the other day. There were drums and fanfares, so I wondered, was it him? Had he escaped my father's rage and come in his nineties to visit me and gloat with some ex-beauty tottering on his arm? I must have wished it. A relief from other thoughts. Even to the most, let's say, adoring fathers daughters lose their glow, and since I had a sister Daddy farmed me out once she had reached the age he liked. Some 'farm' -- this dusty nowhere, a decrepit king who couldn't till my bed. Which satisfied Daddy. What was my fertility to him? The story goes that I was burned up too when fire bombed from the sky to punish him. The woman sitting by his side, like him reduced to charcoal, was my sister. Daddy taught me flesh is foul. Correction. Showed. Correction. All the space there might have been in me for love, hunger, or tenderness was filled with him. Poisons are subtle here, blades fine, plagues frequent. I forget which nephew's nephew grabbed the throne last time the music stopped. Jackie by Kathy Earsman Mosaic Musings That little fellow, Jack, can hardly wait to walk with us to school; he'll soon be five. Each day he waits alone, "See ya!" he says and waves, he lifts his brows and tilts his head in Polynesian style. He's just so sweet! Jackie little Jackie-down-the-street. The men are in the river side by side, their bodies bright with sparkles as they wade a long slow march, the ripples dance and shine, and no-one speaks... I watch the shadows grow until they reach like fingers that would hide down inside the river by the pipe. There's an awful cry, the postman stoops and snatches, boiling up the water where a child comes swinging out in fountain gouts that stream in rivers down his little arms spread out like Jesus' arms upon the cross. Jackie, little Jackie-down-the-street. Then suddenly the air is full of sound; the women on the bridge let out a wail that's crying on and on and I can see the shape of it go spreading like a stain, I see it beating like a wounded gull flying up the river past the pipe. Now Jackie's on the claypan by the bank, his father sucks his mouth and spits a flood. We stand and watch him press on Jackie's chest and darkness grows around, we breathe the cold, but Jackie doesn't breathe, he doesn't move. Jackie little Jackie-down-the-street. Doc Tommo's car spins arcing in a skid; he runs and kneels, he fingers Jackie's throat and looks into his eyes. "It's way too late," the Doctor says, "Give up, it's over Sid, give up I said ! He's dead! He's bloody dead!" Jackie little Jackie-down-the-street. His father picks him up in his big arms and holds him close against him wordlessly. We watch him trudging slowly up the hill and Jackie's mother follows heavily, and everything is still now as I sit down above the river on the pipe where Jackie fell and hit his head. He sank. But no-one said a thing. They ran away because they got a fright. Oh how I wish we never took him with us after school to fish, and play the way he did today half across the river on the pipe. Rhythmically Inapposite by Michael McRandall Pen Shells Lana rides a pony in the cellar unmindful of the children who dance circles at the door -- she wonders if the apathy is terminal, or merely, chronic, but decides it doesn't matter since the colors fade regardless of the song. Neighbors stand in line to borrow vapors which serve to cover shadows that have melted on the floor -- plant roses in her window-box and water them with undiluted inference, Then watch through shuttered windows as she finger-paints a mourning on the sky. Lana makes an early trip to vacant -- where every mother Mary emulates their father's whore -- and withers at the elementary portrait that is drowning in the rearview, as crack-pipes play a reverential etude to a fractured morning buzz. Rapunzel at 49 Learns to Dance the Tarantella by Laurie Byro Desert Moon Review Because she was awkward, the opposite of a spun-sugar baby, a black widow in his glittering web, because she never understood about Dylan and Baez and how she stood out like the purple eye in the delicacy of his Queen Anne's Lace chords, he the pearl shell, the mother of the luminous lake pearl and because she thought his book was Tarantella, never ever understood- pushed up against it like a train heading into snowy Hibbing with those Russian wolves howling outside her window and she breathing the blast of coal smoke and exhaling strings of sweet gas, the floss of cotton candy, she rubs against his arm like a spotting cat, noticing the dark whorls of hair, the eight-legged slip into tyranny. Her taut, tight controlled body just the way he likes it, zippered inside itself, a dance towards his white light, a six pointed star, not cocaine white or holy but because he was the teacher and she the pupil and because she slips inside his skin, minds the illumination of his ghost preacher in and out and in and out and through his incarnations and because her skin has begun to peel, to shed off into a pile of sawdust he blows her onto the floor where she becomes the grit under all the fancy soles, the stilettos and the boot heels, the brave and naked toes. 56 and Sunny by Mitchell Geller About Poetry Forum I concentrated far too much on death, and somehow missed the violet and the crocus, and sharp green shoots that sucked the sun like breath. I concentrated far too much on death; ignored the rose, or some such shibboleth -- let pure, prismatic joy escape my focus. I concentrated far too much on death, and somehow missed the violet and the crocus. Songs from Stephen King's Knapsack III: Insomnia by Gary Blankenship Blue Line Trees don't sleep, although some sit up in bed and pretend. They might even nod off for a cat-nap, but you never catch them in the depths of REM sleep where dreams come from. Some undress preferring to spend the long night nude, nothing between them and the damp fog but some ragged shreds of moss and lichen. Others stay clothed as they watch the moon change from sickle to an old man eye winking. Come day, they yawn and nests fall from great heights.

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