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| The Sun Also Rises Oubliette by Joyelle McSweeney This reader will not presume to discourse
on the nature of sightlines from holes in the ground, even for the laudable
purposes of metaphor. Moreover, in fine poetic tradition, Peter Richards
finds not limit but license in the confines of his oubliette. From
his presumably self-imposed containment in this circular, imagined space,
Richards is able to manipulate the relative size of appearing and departing
figures by efforts so tiny as a squint of the eye or the pinch of two
fingers shut around the moon.
The poems of Oubliette visit and revisit speakers who remain
figuratively or literally earthbound. Rather than engineer false salvations,
Richards draws on his nutshell-autocracy to work up a ready allegory and
elevate to allegorical status stuff that used to just muck around as nouns.
In the book’s final and largest (though not longest) poem, “Dawn,” the
landscape is crowded with not just the title party but also “Nil,”
“Abduction,” “Ellipsis,” “Deference,” “Wheel,” and
“Crib.” No system of meaning obtains, however, and these figures, as
well as the speaker’s indistinguishable companions, cycle out of the poem.
The speaker, without other subject, must pull all the allegorical weight of
the poem onto himself:
I’m
Dawn, moving up on a list of fallen things.
and I beg to differ from the sly part of
gentle. The upsurge here is attractive, but the swaggering rhythm and
confident “I-I-I” of these lines belie their assertions of humility and
lend a false note to the final, self-abnegating declaration of the poem,
“Mine is a poor light/and glad to be//continuing.”
If the strength of Richards’ music sometimes undercuts his
speakers’ claims of passivity and weakness, it also produces much of
beauty. The most solidly gorgeous passages come when a palpable pressure
seems to push in on our trapped speaker, as in “The Bird Maker’s
Last”:
For if the Lord wishes me to be a
bird The tidy testimonial cadence is kicked slant by the unusual use of
“retract,” the not-quite-Quakerish “haste,” and the quirky
theological supposition of the first line. The near rhymes of the final
syllables of ‘obedience’ and ‘service’ lend a prayerlike diminuendo
that seems unforced. The strange grace of this poem is only lightly marred
by the false note of special language struck in its final lines: “It must
be Hesitation—a long time/when no one occurs.”
Oubliette achieves success when, as in the passage above,
Richards’ fine writing convinces us of the integrity of his visions.
Slighter poems, such as “The Moon is a Moon,” a poem that strives only
to debunk conventional moon imagery, come off as exercise. Elsewhere, nimble
and lovely language cannot shore up what seems like arbitrary, even Poetic,
speculation, as in “Nettles”: “How many javelins blunted in
violet/pierce open the spheres relieved of their dead?” In what seems
like an incongruously novice error, two lines of the nine-line poem
“Siphons” are dedicated to the repetition of a single, tenuous image:
“Skin on a mountain embarking for sea/The skin on a mountain.”
At other moments, Richards insists on stretching his poems on Ideas
that run the language past its mark. The lovely “Unable” picks its way
ambivalently through images of fountains and birds to arrive at the
exquisite “When I drank from these waters/I drank from my own face—//and
an endless wet bird/rose from my throat,” only to hammer the bird useless
by concluding “at once wingless/and unable to sing.”
Richards’ weaker choices read like crimes of the poet against his
own considerable talent; in this respect, reading Richards can be as
maddening as reading early Yeats. This is not faint praise, and the
thunderous rising of blurb-clouds off this book suggests an identification
with Richards by a wide range of first-rate poets. Is Richards, then, that
rare bird, a poet’s poet? Oubliette is a promisingly frustrating
book.
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