"All Souls Rising," The Writer's Cut
Copyright Madison Smartt Bell 1995
9 (b)
"See the funny monkey," she said. The doctor squinted. Back there in a larger cage
was a little spider monkey with a long tail and puffs of white hair at its cheeks. It chittered
and wiggled its black fingers.
"Allow me to make you a present of it," the doctor said, and reached into his pocket.
Tullius flashed a grin and named a price, which the doctor paid without question. Claire
began giggling at him as he lifted the cage by its wicker loop.
"Oh, you are too rich," she said, laughing as if the thought amused her hugely. "You
don't bargain." Before the doctor could answer she took his hand unconsciously and gave
it a friendly squeeze across the knuckles and led him away from the stall. In the press of
people he was forced back behind her, but she kept him in tow, her crooked forefinger
linked his. Meanwhile the monkey's tiny hands thrust through the lattice and plucked at
the fine hairs on his wrist. He kept his eye on Claire's head and the miraculously balanced
basket. Her hair was done in a chignon, curving down clublike on the back of her neck,
and caught in a fine web of gold thread. She was cutting diagonally across the square,
toward the monumental fountain in the center, which displayed an image of the sun atop
an Ionic column. When they reached it the doctor pulled her up and stopped to read the
inscription.
"They executed Ogéé, here," Claire said. "Chavannes
aussi . . ."
The doctor jerked his head up, but her expression was
unreadable. She took his
hand again and pulled him forward through the crowd, and he
followed with no demurral,
though his head was humming. He knew little of Ogé, except
that he had raised an
illorganized and unsuccessful rebellion last October,
intended to force compliance with one
of the inscrutable decrees from the metropole which seemed
to guarantee some political
rights for some of the mulattos. Events had proven him a
fool, and his attempt had
accomplished nothing or worse, but many said he had died
bravely, under terrible torture,
and here on this spot. The doctor watched Claire's chignon
bobbing; she had not once
looked back. By caste and color she would be Ogé,'s
partisan, but reprisals against mulattos
had been so vicious after the rebellion failed, here in Le
Cap and everywhere, that who
knew what she might be thinking? He knew just as well that
his skin could not reveal to
her his sentiments. So far as she could tell he might be a
royalist, or one of the faction
seeking independence or even an English protectorate for the
colony, or the sort of scurvy
revolutionist that had surfaced in the coastal cities in
reponse to all the movements back
in Paris. Or something altogether else; he supposed this
last case was the truest. He did
not think of letting go her hand.
Claire lived in two rooms below the Place d'Armes; in
fact it was not far at all from
the inn where he was staying, and Crozac's stableyard. Much
of her furniture was painted
wickerwork, and there were a few pieces in mahagony,
including a small cabinet which
displayed some china bibelots from Europe, a wooden
matrioshka doll, and several curious
carvings that looked to be of local origin. The doctor set
the monkey's cage down on a low
table and followed her beckoning hand into the second room,
where the first thing that
caught his eye was rack on rack of extravagant clothing,
filling half the space; the dresses
ranged from European fashion to the sort of improvised
garment she was wearing today.
She laughed to see him so startled, and gathered a great
mass of the clothes into herself,
hugging them close and smiling with her cheek pressed
against a carnation of multicolored
fabric. The doctor blinked. There were two beds in the
room, one ordinary, covered with
a cinnamon Persian rug. The other was a low daybed, with
head and footboards carved like
a sleigh, but double-width. The doctor nodded as if to
affirm something, he knew not what,
and withdrew into her salon. Claire let the dresses fall
back on their hangers. One slipped
to the floor, but she ignored it, following him.
The light was lowering, glaring in the window that
overlooked the street, and
reflecting back from the large mirror that hung on the
opposite wall. Triangulated by the
beams, the monkey scrambled in its cage, which allowed it
little room to maneuver. Claire
walked around the doctor and stooped to look at it. She
closed one eye, then the other,
back and forth. The monkey stopped what it was doing and
stared at her.
She smiled up at the doctor. "Oh, take him out," she
said. "I want to hold him."
His misgivings were insufficient to stop him from
opening the door of the cage. A
brown blur, the monkey raced up his arm and clawed its way
to the top of his head. The
doctor ducked and whirled around, but the monkey seized hold
of his ears and held on
desperately. Claire was laughing herself breathless, her
head thrown back, while the doctor
slapped at his head as if it had caught fire. The monkey
gathered itself and sprang to the
top of the rolled blind above the window, where it clung
with all four paws, its head twisted
around like an owl's to scream its indignation down at them.
Claire doubled over, her laughter tailing off into
gasps, then straightened up and
caught her breath. The doctor reached for the monkey's
dangling tail, but it twitched up
out of reach immediately, and he stood with his arms akimbo,
frowning. Claire undid the
net from her chignon and shook her hair on her collarbone.
"Let down the blind," she suggested.
The doctor found the strings and worked them to unwind
the roller, but the monkey
walked the spool like an acrobat on a floating log;, and was
still holding its position when
the blind dropped to the sill. The doctor cast about for a
cane or stick or something to
dislodge it, but he couldn't see well in the suddenly
darkened room. His ears were red
where the monkey had mauled them.
"Let him be." Claire's voice sucked down to its center
like a whirlpool. "Let him stay there... for a little."
The doctor turned in time to see her touch herself
cunningly just above the
breastbone. The cotton wrap came undone spontaneously and
whispered to the floor. The
necklace winked at him, her bare skin changed its surface
like a leopard's coat as she
moved forward under the white-hot dots and bars of light
that leaked through the weave
of the blind. Her bracelets softly belled together as she
reached out, and wherever she
touched him a piece of his clothing fell away as though cut
with a hot knife.
Now he understood the function of the daybed. He lay
on his back, her hair
curtaining him from the navel down. Its fringe moved on his
belly in a slow caress. It was
happening very slowly, and still at a speed he could not
stop, but she stopped sharply, with
a low hoarse cry, and swung her long ivory leg up and over
him. He saw her eyes. Her
lips, which looked so large and cushiony, were lively,
muscular on his. Her skin was hot,
and acidly tart. He seemed to feel none of her weight, but
only a slow stroking movement,
her nipples circling on his chest; maybe she was supporting
herself on knees and elbows,
or maybe she was levitating. Cell by cell he was being
strained into her. He caught at her
hips, the knob of bone at the small of her back, and bridged
himself up and nearer.
Their mouths pulled apart with an audible rip. He saw
her eyes barred by her
lashes, and heard her breathing over him, "Tournes-toi,
vite, comme ça." With a lithe and
powerful movement, she reversed herself and slid under him,
agile as a stoat. Instantly they
were engaged again, if they had ever come apart. He put his
hand on the back of her neck
and she flattened herself willingly against the sheet,
clinging to the scrolled headboard
with both her hands. Her mouth uttered some phrases of
creole, then no words, while from
the waist down she moved in ways his study of anatomy would
not have led him to think
possible. He watched her cheek flushing, her mouth bloom to
a burning red as it spread
against the fabric. A wave surged up and carried him high
but instead of crashing down
when it broke he went sailing away into space.
Lying half across her back, he felt her heart pulsing
toward his through his chest
wall. He rested a little, then slipped to the inside of the
bed, drew her over on her side
and touched her face between his two hands. She looked at
him, and curled her fingers
around his wrists. Motes of gold swam in the brown swirl of
her eyes. The cool rings of
her bracelets pressed against his inner arm. He'd lost all
sense of his identity; the last
vestige of the personality he'd brought into the room eddied
somewhere high above like a
flake of ash from some great conflagration. Perhaps it had
an eye, and watched the scene.
He'd slipped his boundaries; there were capabilities in him
he'd never known. This was
vertigo. He might have slept a little. When he came to
himself the light was slightly fading
and Claire was up and wrapped in her sarong, slipping out
the door and signaling him with
a palm-down gesture to remain.
He lay on his back, sweat drying on the small hairs of
his stomach, and watched the
dust flecks spinning in the planes of light that penetrated
the window lattice. But he felt
too alert to doze again, and besides, the mosquitos were
beginning to come whining in.
After a while he got up and put on his trousers and shirt.
Barefoot, he padded into the
other room. The monkey had got the curio cabinet open and
was picking each piece for
a close scrutiny and then dropping it to the floor;
miraculously none had yet broken. With
a quick occult movement, the doctor caught it by the furry
nape of its neck. The monkey
shrieked and screwed its head around but it couldn't reach
to bite him. As he put it back
in the cage he caught sight of himself in the mirror and
smiled.
Returning to the bedroom, he put his eye to a gap in
the lattice over the window and
looked into the inner courtyard of the block. Under the
eave of the house was a clay oven
and some iron cooking pots stacked beside a fire, which had
burned down to coals under
a layer of white ash. Claire hunkered on her heels by the
fire, chattering with two black
women in starched white headcloths, and stirring a pot with
a long-handled spoon. Under
her left arm sat a black hen with a red wattle, its eye
glassily lidded, as if in a trance. The
doctor watched her with admiration and a trace of envy too.
He felt hollow, drilled out
inside, a nameless vacancy that matched his dizziness. She
could squat by the fire with the
blacks or come into these pleasant rooms with him; she was
more free.
This thought was yet half-formed when he was distracted
by the sight of a man in
dandy dress approaching the cookfire from across the court.
Claire laid down the pot and
stood up smoothly from her heels to greet him. The hen
cackled and struggled under her
arm; she adjusted it and soothed it with little strokes
along the length of its wings. Her
back was to the doctor, and over her shoulder he could see
the man's face; it was that same
strange speckled mulatto he'd noticed before at his inn. He
seemed angry, or somehow
distressed. His hands moved before him in cramped imperious
cuts, but his voice was too
low for the doctor to make out, and beneath the suspension
of his freckles his expression
was very hard to read.
Claire's voice rose to a sharp note. She stepped
aside, closing her hand over the
hen's head entirely, and whirled it around so that its own
weight broke its neck. The black
wings jerked convulsively as she tore the head right off
with another twist, and directed the
bright jet of blood into the courtyard. The man jumped
back, while the black women
cackled at him from around the fire. The doctor watched him
stalk away, brushing irritably
at spatters, real or imagined, on his fine clothes.
In the other room he picked up the trinkets and
rearranged them in the cabinet.
The monkey chittered at him constantly; he supposed it
wanted food. He went back to the
daybed and stretched himself out, only long enough to clear
his head, he thought, but he
did sleep, and heavily. When he awakened it was dark and
Claire was calling him to the
table.
She gave him oyster stew and roasted chicken stuffed
with nuts and pineapple.
There was a dish of spinach and two kinds of melon; she had
a very creditable wine. The
doctor ate with fervor. Some part of that emptiness he'd
felt was hunger, so it seemed. He
was coming back more and more to himself as he ate, but it
was not altogether a pleasant
sensation. Claire had eaten rather more lightly. She was
slipping bits of chicken through
the slats of the monkey's cage.
"See how he eats," she said. "He's like a little man."
Solemnly the monkey shredded chicken and fingered it
into its small mouth. The
doctor smiled awkwardly, beginning to feel himself
uncomfortably apelike. He did not quite
know how to manage the thing he thought must be expected of
him.
"I--" he began, and flapped his aimless hands around
the table. "All this, everything,
I should-- I'd like to...."
Claire gave him a cool look. "We will be friends," she
said. "You've done a thing
for me already, the night we meant, and I remember it, comme
tu vois." Their eyes
connected; again the doctor felt the vertiginous depth of
the self he didn't know. She
smiled. "Of course, you may bring me presents if you like."
The doctor scratched the back of his neck,
unconsciously, where a mosquito must
have bitten him. He was unsure if he was dealing with
professional euphemism or
something altogether apart from that. So far as his person
was concerned he was without
much illusion; he knew that he was prematurely bald, and
pear-shaped (though stronger
than he looked), that he had spent the greater part of his
youth blinded to the world by his
studies, that he had no conversation, that he was
uninteresting to any woman he had ever
met. Heretofore he had expressed his nature only through
transactions much more plainly
professional than this one.
"To be sure, I approve of friendship," he finally said.
He toyed with a melon rind,
and went on without knowing that he would. "Who was that
man I saw you with outside?"
For just an instant, the barest glimpse, she looked as
if she'd been stabbed with ice.
Then she was laughing merrily as ever. "Oh, you are
jealous," she said. "Bon ça." She rose
and came around the table toward him. "I think you must
have eaten and rested enough,
then," she said. "Let's see how well you are restored."
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