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A Patient Clarity
Snow Effects: Poems on Impressionists in Winter by Barbara J. McGrath
The subjects of the poems in Lynne Knight’s Snow Effects are fifteen
Impressionist paintings depicting scenes from "some of the most severe winters France
has ever known." Knight brilliantly merges the worlds of painters and poet as she takes
readers on a journey through winter, light, longing, love, and grief. These poems are like
snow flakes falling slowly to earth; the telling of each is unhurried and deliberate,
allowing a story to emerge.
Knight, as omniscient poet, has a gift for entering these
moments fully and offers up with great care the intimate details of the subjects of each
story. At the same time, the sweep of the poet’s brush is wide. For every participant in
this drama of pervasive winter painters, poet, human subjects in the paintings, light,
snow, reader becomes a character in a larger, more inclusive painting about typical
human situations.
Setting context for the poems in "Body That I Bring to You in Winter," the poet
considers the effect of winter on the painters:
To know this, the poet must be adept at changing perspective as she "move[s] in closer /
until I can smell / the oils, feel how the body loses heat."
Her ability to render detail exquisitely at the same time that she reveals each
poem’s larger significance is apparent in "The Snow Bride," in which Mme Lafitte
"hurries / along the lane for butter" so that she may make "pain du beurre, to woo / M
Lafitte back to her." The poet reveals further her character’s thoughts: "there’s no / other
woman, just the general gloom / of winter, cast upon the passing into age," lines that
could be merely the caption for one particular painting; yet they have greater
significance, for example, in adroitly calling up the literal presence of winter as well as
the metaphorical comparison of winter to old age, as Nature again becomes a determining
voice in human affairs.
People, objects, and weather merge in a rare first-person poem, "Body Bent on
More." The persona, 'walking down a snowy road past pines / so heaped with snow they
bend like old women,' worries about her lover’s assessment of her, for he has told her,
"You’re too thin. / All winter in his voice" and "Stop holding all that grief in your spine."
In reply the speaker says, "as if it were a rope I might let down" and "I could have sworn
there was snow / . . . piling on / my spine, bending me over my future." Here concrete
detail and abstraction merge as snow becomes a metaphor for grief, while the body,
weighted down by grief and snow, bears down on its future self. Rarely does a poet
capture such a constellation of meaning in a few apparently simple lines.
Knight is not afraid to journey deep into a painting to render her stories. For
example, in "Body in a Dream of Arms," one of the most poignant poems in the book, the
poet enters painting, then story, then dream. The poet voices the thoughts of a man
caught in endless winter:
three years now, first the child, then her,
rooting and flowering.
A lesser poet might pull back from such details. However, Knight takes the reader with
her into the most difficult of moments and offers them up in all their raw beauty.
Throughout the book are constant reminders of just how pervasive winter and its
effects are. In one of the final poems, "Bodies in a Ghostly Reach," two figures in a
horse-drawn cart "let themselves fall / into the ride like sleepers into dreaming." And,
although the snow already is deep, "It will snow . . . so long / the empty road, blue
stream, even / the vanished trees will cover over," implying that perhaps winter never
will end.
However, from the poet’s perspective, the most severe of winters will not destroy
the human spirit. In the final poem in the book, "Body as a River Passing into Shadow,"
the speaker beckons to the reader, saying with hopefulness:
Individually, these spellbinding poems hold their own. As companion pieces for
the paintings, and as tributes to the painters, their subjects, and survivors of winter
everywhere, they illuminate with patient clarity. Snow Effects is a book to be read over
and over, for each reading offers up greater gifts.
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